budding writer

first of all, thanks :D for informing me when this chapter went out. i loved the first chapter and the second chapter was great. this is only the second chapter ...

i really loved it. i am not really great at reviewing but i have to say you write like any professional author. i would like to point out a few ...

first thing i would say, you are really good. the description was very real, just the way somone would feel if they had gone on a diet. there are a ...

i am the first one reviewing so might as well get on with it. this story was great but i am sure you can do much better. good job. :D ...

i don't really write poetry alot, but 'that' :arrow: poem was certainly good. i don't know about anyone else but i thought it was pretty intresting. i also kind of ...

abit confusing really. :? seems like she came with a runaway horse because she doesn't even know the name and suddenly she knows or remembers. anyway pretty good. in the ...

wow :shock: :: , i mean you are a really good writer. though i would say a few things, - it would help if you could describe the main characters ...